Pitch to me: College Prayer 101

Pitch: College Prayer 101

Millions of college students across the world are waiting for God to answer their prayers. And College Prayer 101 is the prayer devotional to show them how to get it done. Delving into dormitory life, lectures halls and financial aid woes this college prayer book gives students creative prayer strategies to overcome obstacles and live an amazing life while pursuing their academic dreams.

Thanks,
Wanza Leftwich

The first two sentences sound like all you have to do is pray this formula and God will have to answer according to your desires. I don't think that's your intent at all, so you may need to reword it. You also might want to clarify students as "Christian students." I really like the concrete examples you give in the latter half of the pitch. And I do think you've isolated the audience and the need. Good pitch!